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A Glimpse And A Wonder

A dedication (formatting is off - could not get it to line up correctly)

                                                      I've been noticing me
                                                             Noticing you
                                                         More and more.
                                                     Its truly coincidental.
                                                                  I mean...
                                                                I really try...

                                                               You know...

                                     To keep my eyes and mind from wondering,
                                                                    But,

                                                             My, Oh, My
                                                      I  just cannot deny...

                                                  That exquisite physique,

                                    Umh, the way those jeans caress your seat!

                                                   And that soothing voice,

                                              That makes my heart rejoice.

                                                          Let's not forget...

                                           Those beautiful softly brown eyes;

                                                  Those deep shining stars,

                                          Constitute such a profound embrace;

                                                  An embrace so strong that...

                                           It shows enormously all over my face!

                                            Now for that body and the way it moves,

                                                           You have to know,

                                                      That hypnotic liquid flows

                                                                       Like...

                                              The way water runs through a stream

                                                                          Or

                                              The way eagles glide through the sky.
                                                         After looking at all that
                                            Whose mind wouldn't begin to wonder?
                                                     Or should I say remember?
                                                     Now where should I begin?
                                                               Oh, the hands...
                                                 Some say the hands make a man.
                                                   Your hands truly epitomize you -
                                                   Such a strong and manly man.
                                    Strong hands, but such gentle mesmerizing caresses.
                                            Just the right touch to fill my body with...
                                                  Well, it's certainly not distress!
                                                   Now for those succulent lips,
                                                           Your celestial kiss...
                                               What an overwhelming sensation
                                               That transcends and never ends!
                                           Now, I must leave you where I began.
                                  For your very thought evokes such an essence,
                                                  I feel your eternal presence!

                                 All this from a simple glimpse and a moment's wonder.

Comments (6)

Kobe2125

Kobe2125 wrote on May 16, 12:21 PM

Beautiful poem

maat9

maat9 wrote on May 16, 05:43 PM

Thanks!!!  A lighter side of me; see I am not serious 100% of the time.  Laughing

chluke

chluke wrote on May 16, 10:32 PM

Wow!  That was great.  If I didn't know any better, I would have thought you was talking about me.

maat9

maat9 wrote on May 16, 10:49 PM

Hi chluke,

Welcome to Nuzizo (It is about time!!!!)Wink

SoulfulEyz

SoulfulEyz wrote on May 17, 12:11 AM

Awesome!! Smile

miraclesr_4u26

miraclesr_4u26 wrote on May 31, 02:49 PM

this is wonderful.i oe this poem maat9

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